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astridv ([personal profile] astridv) wrote2007-09-13 11:14 pm
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cover art for Speranza's fic

So. Um. I made an illustrated cover art for [livejournal.com profile] cesperanza's Written By The Victors. I hope I did it justice.





This is actually version b - version a would be in panel format and have as a third element that scene of Sheppard, McKay, and Zelenka standing in the hangar on Quana. But the roommates liked this version better, so I went with this one.

That hangar would make a cool motif, though. And I thought that the market place on Atlantis would have been ideal on the cover, but it would've taken too long to draw and color. Also, I tried to get Teyla and Ronon on there as well, but it would get too cluttered. Those could make great illustrations for chapter headings though. Theoretically.

And I'm not 100% done with it, as usual there're a dozen details I want to fix later... [eta: fixed]

Media: ink, watercolor, ecoline, acrylics

[identity profile] newkidfan.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
You are good, and I mean really good. Woah. It's gorgeous.

Out of curiosity: is it all computer made, or is part of it traditionally made and then scanned?
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks.


Out of curiosity: is it all computer made, or is part of it traditionally made and then scanned?


No computer, it's all traditionally made and then scanned. It's mostly watercolor and acrylics. Eh, I should edit in which media I used.

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[personal profile] fleurrochard 2007-09-13 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love it, it's so beautiful!
Also, you really see the force and power and that explosion and you can almost hear it - and then there is the peace and quiet in the upper part of the image, where the seagulls are flying over the ocean and Atlantis...
And I adore John and Rodney's expressions.

That hangar would make a cool motif, though. And I thought that the market place on Atlantis would have been ideal on the cover, but it would've taken too long to draw and color. Also, I tried to get Teyla and Ronon on there as well, but it would get too cluttered. Those could make great illustrations for chapter headings though. Theoretically.

Ooooooh! Those pictures would be so cool!
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, I'm really happy you like it!

Ooooooh! Those pictures would be so cool!

Ah, so little time, so much interesting stuff to draw... I've never really drawn anything sci-fi before, so maybe that's why I'd really like to have a go at that space ship hangar. And the market scene is so important for that 'verse that I'd be tempted to tackle that even though I my innate laziness leads me to avoid drawing crowds...
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[identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
very cool space battle...
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
And FUN to draw!
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[identity profile] winter-elf.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Wow!! Beautiful. I love how you detail water and great details with the peace of the upper with the fight of the lower - and great Sheppard & Mckay!!!! I'm in awe :)
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, very glad you like. (I'm mostly, but not entirely happy with my McKay. I think his hair could be fluffier. Now I'm struggling with Photoshop in an attempt to fluffen up the hairdo...)

[identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent artwork for the story. The detail in the waves and city is amazing. I love the expressions on the boy's faces and it all ties in perfectly with the story.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly, I'm glad you like!
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[personal profile] trinity_clare 2007-09-14 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, it's beautiful.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
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[personal profile] anna_luna 2007-09-14 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
:D Wow! This is gorgeous! I really love the colors and the collage of the different moments in the story.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

The coloring turned out kind of differently than I had in mind (though I can't at all remember *what* I had in mind) but I'm still pleased (if surprised) with how it turned out. :)
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 04:21 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's so cool. I love love love the background - space battle! *glee* Wonderful.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Things I learned from this: space battles are fun to draw.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks :)

[identity profile] gaffsie.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 11:55 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that looks really cool. I really like the balance between the three elements; Atlantis, the boys, and the space battle.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. There were so many possible scenes to choose from, I'm happy that those I picked work for you. :)

[identity profile] jwaneeta.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooooh, pretty! This is going to sound a little off, but I also relly like the consistent light source. Neat!

[identity profile] jwaneeta.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
"Odd," not "off." Typing lefty, or trying to. ;)

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[identity profile] ileliberte.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
The background is the most fascinating part to me, the waves look really cool and the explosion in space is lovely. Makes me think of old comic books, very nice.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I usually have comic book/graphic novel in mind when I'm drawing, even if it's just single scenes... it's the style I'm most interested in right now and fandom is a great sandbox to play around with it.

btw, your Teyla icon is gorgeous. You captured her features perfectly.

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[identity profile] raucousraven.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
WOOOOAAAOW. *stares* I can never get my comic-style sketches to do their models justice like that. You = Amazing! Thanks for the loveliness.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks :o)
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[personal profile] bingeling 2007-09-15 07:38 am (UTC)(link)
I really, really love this! Great work! :D
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
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[personal profile] vass 2007-09-15 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
That gave me shivers.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, reading that makes me smile like a loon...

[identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 12:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Utterly gorgeous.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly.

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[personal profile] littlemousling 2007-09-15 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW! That water alone just blows my mind. And Atlantis is so ... Atlantis. And I love Rodney's forehead! And the explosion! And, and, and ... just, wow. I can barely draw stick figures. Sigh. Oh, well, I'll just assume you can't knit for crap and try to not feel massively inferior that way. ;)

(Here via Speranza's LJ)
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, well, I'll just assume you can't knit for crap and try to not feel massively inferior that way. ;)

*g* Yup. In fact my few attempts at knitting were not encouraging.

Glad you like!
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[identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
This is v. cool. *gaze*
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-16 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. Thank you.

[identity profile] firesprite1105.livejournal.com 2007-09-19 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so awesome. :)
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-20 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks :)

[identity profile] sundara.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful cover!! Please let us see the other pieces, also...the panels left out, the marketplace, Teyla and Ronon. Yes! Just gorgeous.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you like.

Please let us see the other pieces, also...the panels left out, the marketplace, Teyla and Ronon. Yes! Just gorgeous.

Don't know yet if I can get around to doing the marketplace (maybe in a rougher, conceptual-art style, that would work pretty well and would be less time-consuming.) I really want to do some colored art of Ronon and Teyla at some point.
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[personal profile] tinny 2007-09-23 03:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice use of the original Atlantis image! The watercolors are great for that kind of thing, they blend the three parts very well together.

The only thing that's bugging me a bit is John's face. There's something off that I can't define. I know that the angle is really hard to get right, I personally stick mostly with straight ahead and profile drawings to avoid the problem altogether. ;) I think the mouth and nose are not exactly placed right in relation to the eyes, maybe?

I hope it's okay to criticize your wonderful work like that. I personally would love to hear constructive criticism on my icons, so I always try to be honest when commenting on other people's artwork. Let me know if that's not okay and I'll concentrate on the positive aspects.

And don't worry, there are *lots* of those in this image!

I *love* Rodney's face, for example. It captures exactly his expressive mimics. And the way the stars merge into the waves. And everyone else already mentioned the contrast between the quiet landscape and the space battle.

I still haven't read all of Speranza's story. I started before I got ill and never got to finish it.



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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-23 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Let me know if that's not okay and I'll concentrate on the positive aspects.

Oh hell, no. No worries, concrit is always welcome. In this line of work you better get used to having your work dissected on a regular basis. ;)

Though in this case I must admit I really like Sheppard's face... though not so much for pitch-perfect likeness but because of how the lines turned out (I was going for a very reduced style, and it's a hit-and-miss with that). Actually it was Rodney's that I was struggling with - his expressions are so hard to get right, I feel. So, very interesting to hear that you think I captured him better. Huh.

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[identity profile] raiining.livejournal.com 2007-09-26 10:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, *gorgeous*!
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-27 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :o)

[identity profile] npetrenko.livejournal.com 2007-09-27 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely pic.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2007-09-28 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly.