I have Servare Vitas on story alert, of course. :) I'm so engrossed by now, when I get the new chapter I close the door to my room so I can read it uninterrupted.
... I shall go over to ffn to comment in more detail, instead of here.

Actually, I just realized I can rather comment at your LJ. (I loathe ffn's clunky comment feature; it's like its sole purpose is to stifle discussion.)