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astridv ([personal profile] astridv) wrote2006-05-28 09:51 pm

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So, I'm collaborating with [livejournal.com profile] yhlee on a new comic. Well, her work is done, mine's just started. I plan to post this one chronologically for a change ('cause it, ya know, makes more sense that way... even though I usually start with my favourite pages, or the ones that will go fastest). The next few days I probably won't have that much time to work on it so until I got some actual complete artwork to post, here's a sneak preview.




This is the inkwork for page 2, more or less finished. It still needs a few shades added but now the upstairs roommate demands an episode of Bones, and who am I to argue... [eta: Oh, The Woman at the Airport is so much better on second viewing. What a pleasant surprise. The out-of-sync sound in my first avi file was so irritating that I couldn't really appreciate the snappy dialogue.]

[identity profile] frimfram.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
This is incredible - I can't wait to see more.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
I can't wait to see more.

Me either. ^_^

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm already on pins and needles. This is fabulous.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I really hope you'll enjoy it. It's fun to do comic again.

[identity profile] yhlee.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
Bwahahaha. You realize I will rack my brains all the while thinking of more scripts?

(Fear not. The brain, it moveth slowly.)

*runs away*
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! Well, I still want to do like a Bones one-pager or something like that. Though I don't know when, Ahrgh.

[identity profile] hannasus.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's fantastic! My favorite LJ artist collaborating with my favorite LJ writer? Priceless. :)
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
*cough* I'll try my damnedest not to disappoint.
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[personal profile] rahirah 2006-05-28 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh!
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
:o)
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome! I'm so looking forward to this!
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Me too, yo :)

[identity profile] yhlee.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
W00t!

I couldn't appreciate it so clearly in the pencils, but I love the way the strong areas of black lead you through the action.

*gushes*
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I need to add a few more black areas particularly in the upper left, but there always comes a stage where I get timid, so I take a break and look at something else. I'll experiment on printouts before adding the rest of the darks.



[identity profile] whichwitch666.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa, this is so intriguing plot-wise! I'm dying to know what's going on.

The art is just wonderful, Gunn's face at the top - so cool!

One constructive note: the body proportions in the upper panel is a bit off - Angel and the guy he's smacking look kinda too short, or the upper body is not in proportions with the lower body (i'm lacking the word in english). Hope it's ok, me mentioning this.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Concrit is very welcome, particularly at this stage when it's easy to fix stuff. You're right, of course. I'd been meaning to shrink the smacked guy's head, but I forgot when I posted this. But I will definitely fix this before printing it out for colouring, along with a few other things.

That is the part where I really love Photoshop (or Paint Shop Pro in my case)... it is so handy for changing these little details in no time.

[identity profile] whichwitch666.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I kinda knew you'd be ok with the concrit, but... well, this is the internet, where the smallest none-praise can be called "a flame", so you can really never know :)

And you're right - being able to easily fix or delete things is one of THE reasons to incorporate computer programs in your work.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* if I had a problem with concrit, I'd be in real trouble.

And you're right - being able to easily fix or delete things is one of THE reasons to incorporate computer programs in your work.

Just the fact that I don't have to ride to the copyshop every time I need something enlarged or shrunk makes it priceless... and imagine my cry of glee when I discovered that my printer can handle light watercolour paper.

[identity profile] whichwitch666.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you're finding the finer sides of working on the computer. I know you were unsure, even a couple of weeks ago.

The downside (well, one of them, I guess, if you're used to working by hand) is to remember to save the work every few seconds, and I mean SECONDS. I got used to saving after every minor change (with photoshop's Snapshot option, it's really easy to go back to the way it's been before you saved. Though I don't know how that goes in PSP)
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you're finding the finer sides of working on the computer. I know you were unsure, even a couple of weeks ago.

Oh no, I've been enlarging and shrinking happily for quite a while now. But that's it really... enlarging, shrinking, and printing. I'm not really using its full potential, you could say. ;o)

[identity profile] whichwitch666.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhh.. I see :)
Well, it's only a matter of time.

God, I just had a frightening thought: when you get fluent in photoshop-based drawing... there's no telling how good you'll be, and how bad I'll envy your talent!!
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Hah. No chance of that ever happening. It's weird, I had no problem learning html, and even Perl didn't scare me. But I have a Photoshop phobia.

But anyway, I'll never use photoshop for drawing. But I think it will be very useful for reworking artwork done in traditional media. And my roommate recently had a job where the publisher wanted the finished artwork sent to their server. And she knew even less about this stuff than me. Now she knows a lot more, but man, it cost her nervers.

I think there's a good chance that this will become more common - turning in the artwork digitally. After all, the client saves the money for the computer guy, so it's convenient for them. Just for that alone, I'd like to be prepared.
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beta?

[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-29 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Would you be interested in betaing this, by any chance? Normally I have my roommate look over my artwork (she's out of town right now) but it would be good to have someone who's really into the 'verse to do that. I particularly want to make sure that the story translates onto the page all right; Yoon and I want to keep it light on text while still making sure that the reader knows what's going on. I'd send you an inked version of each page with makeshift lettering.

The whole thing will be about 8-10 pages long so it shouldn't be too time-consuming. I want to post the first two pages next week or the week after, then one page/month. Needless to say, no problem if you don't feel like doing it!

Re: beta?

[identity profile] whichwitch666.livejournal.com 2006-05-30 11:42 am (UTC)(link)
Sure, it would be my pleasure :)
You can send me the pages to my 'bluejway' mail.
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Re: beta?

[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2006-05-30 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent, thanks!